Saturday, June 28, 2008

The Rainbow Pup, Series #1

Once upon a time, there was a pup. She was born by an ordinary dog, but she was born rainbow colored. She was born to be special and someone adopted her.


When she was one month old, over night she snuck out under the fence. (She dug a whole under the fence.)


She set off for Goblin Gate. Rainbow pup blended in with the gate. Then she jumped up and blended in with the sky. No one saw her. She was safe from Goblin Gate. Okay, at least she thought she was safe.



There were four more goblins on the side of the gate she was on. When she saw the first one, she quickly turned green to look like a bush. When she was out of Goblin Gate she came to Dangerous Dragon Palace.



She snuck around the right side. There was a dragon on the left side.


She came to Pokemon Town next. There were Piplup, Pikachu, and Phanpy. She almost got hit by Mudkip's water gun. It took awhile to get through Pokemon Town because like 300 Pokemon lived there.


Pikachu got mad at Rainbow pup for jumping on his back to dodge Mudkip's attack.


At last she got to Little Town. Everything was small, except her. She smooshed 900 million houses. She smooshed zero people even though they were small.


She smooshed zero pets even though they were the smallest there.


She smooshed only one hotel. (That hotel had no business people.)


Little Town thought there were such things as aliens. As soon as she crossed the Little Town, she decided it was time to go home.

written by Ava, 1st grade
THE END.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Lena and Annika are inspired to write her own story now. Great job Ava!

Monica Ims said...

I'm glad that she clarified there were no business travelers in the hotel that was smooshed. Hopefully no vacationing families either!

That was super cute - thanks for sharing.

Haven't you been in North Dakota?